Partners In Design

9.13.2006

Buisness Card

Hey, I'v been working on this card for my cousin. Tell me what you guys think. I didn't design the logo.



2 comments:

Shalimar said...

this looks good. there is something a little off, i think about the address. The negative space in between each line of type is a little strange, maybe open up the leading a bit, also the name might be too big, how about you make everything the same point size but leave the name red. I dont think it needs to be emphasized twice... OR you can just punch me in the face. :-)

Alexandra said...

I like the logo design, very spiffy. I agree with Shal, something is off. Maybe line it up with the logo more, less symmetrical. Making everything the same point size might help as well.