this looks good. there is something a little off, i think about the address. The negative space in between each line of type is a little strange, maybe open up the leading a bit, also the name might be too big, how about you make everything the same point size but leave the name red. I dont think it needs to be emphasized twice... OR you can just punch me in the face. :-)
I like the logo design, very spiffy. I agree with Shal, something is off. Maybe line it up with the logo more, less symmetrical. Making everything the same point size might help as well.
this looks good. there is something a little off, i think about the address. The negative space in between each line of type is a little strange, maybe open up the leading a bit, also the name might be too big, how about you make everything the same point size but leave the name red. I dont think it needs to be emphasized twice... OR you can just punch me in the face. :-)
ReplyDeleteI like the logo design, very spiffy. I agree with Shal, something is off. Maybe line it up with the logo more, less symmetrical. Making everything the same point size might help as well.
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